Week Five

Taking away from what I learned in critique I developed my idea further and created the image below

"Don't make it harder than it needs to be."

I was hoping that the image would convey the serious tone of isolation that was going for. I added the "swipe to unlock" over the cage so that was a visual connection from an Iphone to "unlocking" the cage.

However, after a discussion with the people in my table they pointed out to me that ideas were conflicting as adding the swipe lock implied that you had to use your phone to free yourself, which was the complete opposite direction I was going for.

Also after some consultation with the tutor I also discovered that my tag line was too wordy and did not collaborate well with the image.